I have two main concerns with Sara! One is attaining a balance between strength and fragility. I’m both worried that she’s too strong, as well as not strong enough. So if you think I could improve in either area with her character, please let me know!
The second is keeping her posts engaging. Is she interesting? I sometimes worry my tags are boring to others so please let me know if that’s the case.
I’m open to other crit too but that is just what I could think of off the top of my head!
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I have two main concerns with Sara! One is attaining a balance between strength and fragility. I’m both worried that she’s too strong, as well as not strong enough. So if you think I could improve in either area with her character, please let me know!
The second is keeping her posts engaging. Is she interesting? I sometimes worry my tags are boring to others so please let me know if that’s the case.
I’m open to other crit too but that is just what I could think of off the top of my head!