Someone wrote in [community profile] ariel_ooc 2012-11-26 03:42 pm (UTC)

I've noticed with some of your threads, and with Jake specifically, that if you're actively trying to not have him have sex it doesn't leave a lot for him to actually do. There's only so long two muses can chew over one another's life stories, the weather, and other mundane stranger talk before they're left blinking at one another with nothing to say.

By all means, make him discriminating about his sex partners, but since being easy makes the threads easy, if he's not going to be getting down, then you need to consider what's going to make him interesting in the threads. I've seen a couple and been in one where it was like the other muse was dragging him along by the nostrils to continue the thread once the initial Typical Stranger Conversation A was complete.

I don't know how to word it any better. I just think maybe you're playing him a bit -too- cool sometimes.

Skylar seems sort of unmemorable in general. Off the top of my head, I can't really say anything about her except that she likes machines. My advice to you for her is to maybe branch out a little and find other things that make her interesting.

This may all be kind of premature, too, since it's still the first month and they're all still finding their feet in the game, but it maybe will give you some ideas to think about.

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