You do have a point there about her being a light switch, I think. The mad part I'm good with, but I hadn't been wanting to make her quietly submissive at all. I'd been trying to get at "irritated, subdued, and downtrodden" as she's fresh out of re-education, and that I didn't exactly capture it is a bit disheartening though informative. Hopefully, I can improve on that.
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