Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this crit, anon!
You're definitely right about my holding back sometimes. It's something I really need to work on with Daryl, I know. I guess I am worried about offending people or putting people off tagging him. I shouldn't, because Daryl is a pretty rough guy and he's got a temper. I'll definitely try to bring it out more in him.
Multiple conversations... I know that's a problem too. It's a hard habit to break the habit, but you're right. It makes the conversation feel awkward and not very realistic. Your tip is really good. I like it, haha.
I'll be sure and watch for repeating back what's already been stated in previous comments too. You're right, I'm trying to show Sam or Daryl's reactions, but I can definitely see how it probably just gets repetitive, especially in smut threads. I guess I just need to remember I don't have to have them react on like, EVERYTHING or the same things the other person might. I'm bad about trying to pad out comments sometimes because I don't want them to seem half-assed or to give back less than I get (which is stupid, I know! I'll work on it), so I add in stuff that's probably best left unsaid.
It doesn't sound harsh at all! I'm really appreciative you took the time to write this all up. It definitely gave me some things to think on and I'll try to keep it in mind in my future tags. I'm really glad you like playing with me otherwise too! Again, thanks for the comment.
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You're definitely right about my holding back sometimes. It's something I really need to work on with Daryl, I know. I guess I am worried about offending people or putting people off tagging him. I shouldn't, because Daryl is a pretty rough guy and he's got a temper. I'll definitely try to bring it out more in him.
Multiple conversations... I know that's a problem too. It's a hard habit to break the habit, but you're right. It makes the conversation feel awkward and not very realistic. Your tip is really good. I like it, haha.
I'll be sure and watch for repeating back what's already been stated in previous comments too. You're right, I'm trying to show Sam or Daryl's reactions, but I can definitely see how it probably just gets repetitive, especially in smut threads. I guess I just need to remember I don't have to have them react on like, EVERYTHING or the same things the other person might. I'm bad about trying to pad out comments sometimes because I don't want them to seem half-assed or to give back less than I get (which is stupid, I know! I'll work on it), so I add in stuff that's probably best left unsaid.
It doesn't sound harsh at all! I'm really appreciative you took the time to write this all up. It definitely gave me some things to think on and I'll try to keep it in mind in my future tags. I'm really glad you like playing with me otherwise too! Again, thanks for the comment.